J'ai un devoir d'anglais à faire mais je suis pas très forte en ce qui concerne les temps et l'orthographe. Pouvez vous me corriger mon devoir svp. (il fallait écrire un rapport de façon formelle). I spent three months as an intern in the company Diftco, near Birmingham, under the supervision of Ms Witten. The main objective of the internship was to improve the knowledge in management and to get some management experience. Diftco is specialized on equipment construction exportation and is one of the most profitable firms in the region. During the placement, I worked mostly in the Export Office where I was in charge of preparing shipping documents. I also worked in warehouse, where the equipment is assembled and packed, to check containers. This experience was very gratifying. I learnt to use bar code system which is a really sophisticated automatic system. However, even if this system is very sophisticated, it can’t exclude human error. In fact, I had accidentally sent a container in Austria instead of Australia because I had not understood well what the client said on the phone. This allowed me to learn an important lesson, to double-check information. I was impressed about the motivated and hardworking staff that the company have. Moreover, I had a good rapport with the export staff but the relationship with the warehousemen was more difficult. It was interesting and formative to work at Diftco but I think that it would be more attractive if there would be less routine paperwork. Furthermore, there was a problem of waste in the warehouse. A system of recycling could help reduce waste. Finally, during the three-month internship, my aim was to invest myself in the entrusted work, to achieve meaningful results for the company. The knowledge I had acquired in International trade in last semester has really helped me understand the environment in which I worked. However, I mostly worked alone and I have not been able to achieve my main goal which was to gain management experience. I think having an internship at Diftco would be more useful for a first-year student than a second-year student because they should have more management responsibility. Merci

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2012-10-17T13:10:02+02:00

Bonjour,

 

J'ai mis en gras ce qui me semblait faux ou manquant. Par contre, je n'ai pas repéré d'erreur dans les temps employés.

 

I spent three months as an intern in the company Diftco, near Birmingham, under the supervision of Ms Witten. The main objective of the internship was to improve the knowledge in management and to get some management experience. I spent three months as an intern in the company Diftco, near Birmingham, under the supervision of Ms Witten. The main objective of the internship was to improve the knowledge in management and to get some management experience. Diftco is specialized in equipment construction exportation and is one of the most profitable firms in the region. During the placement, I worked mostly in the Export Office where I was in charge of preparing shipping documents. I also worked in a warehouse, where the equipment is assembled and packed, to check containers.This experience was very gratifying. I learnt to use bar code system which is a really sophisticated automatic system. However, even if this system is very sophisticated, it can’t exclude human error. In fact, I had accidentally sent a container in Austria instead of Australia because I had not understood well what the client said on the phone. This allowed me to learn an important lesson, to double-check information. I was impressed about the motivated and hard working staff that the company has. Diftco is specialized in equipment construction exportation and is one of the most profitable firms in the region. During the placement, I worked mostly in the Export Office where I was in charge of preparing shipping documents. I also worked in a warehouse, where the equipment is assembled and packed, to check containers. This experience was very gratifying. I learnt to use bar code system which is a really sophisticated automatic system. However, even if this system is very sophisticated, it can’t exclude human error. In fact, I had accidentally sent a container in Austria instead of Australia because I had not understood well what the client said on the phone. This allowed me to learn an important lesson, to double-check information. I was impressed about the motivated and hard working staff that the company has. Moreover, I had a good rapport with the export (or expert ?) staff but the relationship with the warehousemen was more difficult. It was interesting and formative to work at Diftco but I think that it would be more attractive if there would be less routine paperwork. Furthermore, there was a problem of waste in the warehouse. A system of recycling could help reduce waste. Finally, during the three-month internship, my aim was to invest myself in the entrusted work, to achieve meaningful results for the company.

 

Voilà.

 

A bientôt.