J'aimerais bien que vous me corrigiez SVP
C'est un itinéraire touristique
"I suggest you to begin by visiting the Parliament Hill . After the visit you will eat at the Beckto Dinig and Wine wich is a really good restaurant , to go at this restaurant you will turn to the left on the Bank st, you will go along the Bank st and you will take to the right on Nepean st. After eating you will relax by watching the landscape in Garden of the Provinces and Territories , to accomplish this you will go along Nepean st as far as Bay st where you will turn to the right , then you will take to the left on Sparks st. You will arrive ! Subsequently you will make a U-turn and will go along Sparks st , to arrive at your hotel Ottawa Marriot "

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2014-01-03T18:42:17+01:00
Je pense qu'au lieu de mettre Will partout, tu pourrais mettre 'll, ou bien can, et varier les structures pour alléger un pe le discours ( qui fait très écrit au demeurant )
Ok donc je change un peu will / can / 'll . Mais pour varier les structures je ne sais pas vraiment :/