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I chatted with Mickael , to ask him of my father and I could picked him up before school tomorrow . He accepted and then... Guess what?! he asked me for what am I doing friday. I was so excited , he was certainly going to ask me out and I was right : he asked me if I wanted to go to dinner at the screening Room because they're showing StarWars.
I am so happy, in more STarWArs is my favourite movie . i have to ask my mother if I can go out friday but it´s sure that she will agree . I am eager to being friday but at the same time I am anxious . it´s look like a date. maybe it will be the opportunity to admit him my feelings. Later , I tried to tell him my feelings but I couldn't do it. it was too embarassing.
If I tell him my feelings while he doesn't love me , it could become too weird between us and i could loose him . Anyway , i am very satisfied that he invited me. I am the luckiest girl.

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2013-12-24T16:16:12+01:00
Voilat en angalais 
 I chatted with Mickael , to ask him of my father and I could picked him up before school tomorrow . He accepted and then... Guess what?! he asked me for what am I doing friday. I was so excited , he was certainly going to ask me out and I was right : he asked me if I wanted to go to dinner at the screening Room because they're showing StarWars. I am so happy, in more STarWArs is my favourite movie . i have to ask my mother if I can go out friday but it´s sure that she will agree . I am eager to being friday but at the same time I am anxious . it´s look like a date. maybe it will be the opportunity to admit him my feelings. Later , I tried to tell him my feelings but I couldn't do it. it was too embarassing.
If I tell him my feelings while he doesn't love me , it could become too weird between us and i could loose him . Anyway , i am very satisfied that he invited me. I am the luckiest girl.

et voilat en français 
J'ai discuté avec Mickael, pour lui demander de mon père et que je pouvais lui ramassé avant l'école demain. Il a accepté et puis ... Devinez quoi? il m'a demandé ce que je fais vendredi. J'étais tellement excité, il allait certainement me demander de sortir et j'avais raison: il m'a demandé si je voulais aller dîner à la salle de projection, car ils montrent StarWars.  Je suis si heureux, en plus de Starwars est mon film préféré. je dois demander à ma mère si je peux sortir vendredi, mais c'est sûr qu'elle sera d'accord. Je suis impatient d'être vendredi, mais en même temps je suis impatient. ça ressemble à une date. ce sera peut-être l'occasion de lui avouer mes sentiments. Plus tard, j'ai essayé de lui dire mes sentiments, mais je ne pouvais pas le faire. il a été trop embarrassant.
Si je lui dis mes sentiments alors qu'il ne m'aime pas, il pourrait devenir trop bizarre entre nous et je ne pouvais le perdre. Quoi qu'il en soit, je suis très satisfait qu'il m'a invité. Je suis le plus chanceux fille.
2013-12-24T17:28:35+01:00