It's Monday afternoon, Elisa wait for Ariadne in a restaurant.
"Hello why are you so late "says Elisa
"Hello sorry I was struck in a traffic jam " explains Ariadne
"I'm waiting since 30 minutes" answers Elisa angry
"Yes I kwon , I'm sorry "says Ariadne
"Where are you coming from " request Elisa
"I come just from my office" answers Ariadne
"Okay! Look at me ! Since I telecommute I 'm never late, because I can make my own schedule "argues Elisa
" yes but I work in an office and I can not make my own schedule" answers Ariadne disappointed.
"But why didn't you work from home like me?" Asks Elisa
"Because I have young children's and it will be impossible for me to work at home with them "answers Ariadne
"My children's are at home too and I'm still working at home it's not a problem for me " explains Elisa 130
" I prefer to have my family live and my job life it's more easy for me and at work I have my colleagues who are my friends to and I can speak with them " argues Ariadne
"Yes you have your colleagues and I have colleagues too . The difference is that you work not all together in an office with our boss and so we are not stressed " explains Elisa
"I'understand I kwon that sometimes My boss stressed me but it s not a problems for me because I have my colleagues and they help me " says Ariadne
" you have your own opinion and I have my opinion but I think that telecommuting has many advantages. For example you are alway's at home and you can take care of your family " answers Elisa happy
"Yes sometimes it's difficult to be far away from my family but I have no choice " says Ariadne sad
"I have a proposition for you my boss search new employee maybe you can try to telecommute ?" Asks Elisa
"Yes good idea ! Can I have your boss number please ?" Answers Ariadne happy
"Yes with pleasure ! "Argues Elisa
"Thank Elisa bye see you soon " says Ariadne
"Bye Ariadne and good luck !" Answers Elisa with a big smile

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le text doit etre au present simple
ah ok bon ba réctifie au moins tes fautes de pluriels :)

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2013-12-08T14:14:40+01:00
Il est bien ton texte mais juste il faudrait que tu réctifie quelques fautes d'ortographes si c'est au propre comme:
- known = know
- wait= waiting
-says= say (réctifie tes petites faute de pluriels parce que c'est peut être un détail mais ça fait perdre des points y'en a plusieurs )

Meilleure réponse !
2013-12-08T15:38:37+01:00
It's Monday afternoon, Elisa is waiting for Ariadne in a restaurant. 
"Hello why are you so late? "says  Elisa 
"Hello sorry I was stuck in a traffic jam " explains Ariadne .
"I have been waiting for 30 minutes" answers Elisa  angry. 
"Yes I know, I'm sorry "says Ariadne .
"Where are you coming from ?" asks Elisa .
"I  just come from my office" answers Ariadne .
"Okay! Look at me ! Since I telecommuted I 'm never late, because I can make my own schedule "argues Elisa .
" Yes but I work in an office and I cannot make my own schedule" answers Ariadne disappointed. 
"But why didn't you work from home like me?" Asks Elisa 
"Because I have young children's and it will be impossible for me to work at home with them "answers Ariadne. 
"My children's are at home too and still  I work at home. It's not a problem for me " explains Elisa .
" I prefer to have my family life and my job life appart;  it's easier to handle for me. Moreover, I have colleagues at work who are friends I can speak with, argues Ariadne .
"Yes  I do have colleagues too . The  only difference is that we don't work in the same office as our boss and so we are not stressed " explains Elisa.
"I understand.  I confess that my  boss stressed me every now and then but it is not a big concern thanks to my colleagues's  help " says Ariadne .
" We both have opposite opinions but I think that telecommuting has many advantages. For example you are always at home and you can take care of your family " answers Elisa happy. 
"Yes, sometimes working far away from one's family is difficult but I have no choice so far " says Ariadne sadly. 
"I have a proposition for you. My boss searches a new employee. Maybe would you like to try telecommuting ?", asks Elisa.
"Yes good idea ! Can I have your boss 's number, please ?" ,answers Ariadne looking happy. 
"Yes with pleasure !", argues Elisa. 
"Thanks Elisa. Bye and see you soon " replies  Ariadne 
"Bye Ariadne and good luck !", answers Elisa with a big smile. 
J'ai reformulé certaines phrases et ai corrigé certaines fautes. Dis-moi si tu as des questions...
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