Je doit écrire un texte en anglais sur décrire un super héros et j'aimerai savoir si j'a fat beaucoup de fautes merci
mon texte: My superhero is called butterfly because she has wings blue and black of
butterfly in the back.his alter ego is Amelia Smith. She has 18 years old.
She is wearing a pink and purple bodysuit, there is also a little blue. She
is wearing a blue mask she has purple hair.When she was 8 years old, his
parents were killed by scientifics. the scientifics have kidnapped the butterfly
girl and took her in the laboratory of scientific crazy.
She was used to experience with of
butterfly to try to created a fusion between human and insect.
One day, a experience went wrong
and one part of laboratory has exploded and the butterfly girl is
escaped.His enemy s the scientific crazy.
He has wings of bat and he is wearing a bodysuit red. He has glasses
red.
She can fly because she has wings,
she fight with a whip. She can control butterfly, she can speak
their.
She run fast. She can throw lasers
with his eyes.
She use her powers to try of
protect the people.

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2013-11-11T17:56:12+01:00
My superhero is called butterfly because she has blue and black wings in the back. Her alter ego is Amelia Smith.
She is 18 years old.
She is wearing a pink and purple bodysuit, with a little touch of blue.
She 
is wearing a blue mask and she has purple hair.
When she was 8, her 
parents were killed by scientists.
The 
scientists have kidnapped the butterfly girl and took her in their scientific crazy laboratory.
The scientists tried to create a fusion between human and insect.
One day, an experience went wrong and one part of the laboratory has exploded and the butterfly girl escaped.
Her enemy was the crazy s
cientist.
He has wings of a bat and he is wearing a bodysuit red.
He has 
red glasses.
She can fly because she has wings, 
She fights with a whip. She can control butterfly, she can speak to them.
She runs fast. She can throw lasers with her eyes.
She uses her powers to try protect the people.
voila, maintenant, je ne suis pas sure a 100% au niveau de la conjugaison des temps employés
my superhero is called butterfly because she has blue and black wings in the back her alter ego is amelia Smith she is 18 years old she is wearing a pink and purple bodysuit with a little touch of blue.she is wearing a blue mask and she has purple hair
pour le voc je suis pas sur mais la conjugaison tout est juste