cc :) j ai un devoir maison en anglais a rentre pour demain .

le sujet est les vacances de toussaint qui faut l écrire au prétérite

aider moi SVP!

vous pourriez me le corriger ?

PENDANT MES VACANCES, Pendant 3 jours j'ai rendu visite mes grands-parents. Chaque fois je vais là, je suis sorti avec ma grande soeur et nous avons fait du vélo. Chaque fois en rencontre des nouveaux amis . Puis nous avons aller au cinéma.Pendant la deuxième semaine, je continuais souvent Paris, je suis monté à la Tour Eiffel avec ma mère et ma petite soeur et nous pourrions voir tout le Paris, c'était magique et fabuleux!! C'était la deuxième fois que je vais là mais la première fois que je vais là j'étais un enfant, j'étais 3 ans

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For three days I visited my grandparents. Every time I go there, I went out with my big sister and we bike. Each time meeting new friends. Then we go to cinema.During the second week, I often kept Paris, I went to the Eiffel Tower with my mother and my little sister and we could see all of Paris, it was magical and fabulous! It was the second time I go there, but the first time I go there I was a child, I was 3 years

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2013-11-03T19:34:35+01:00
During my vacations, For three days I visited my grandparents. Every time I go there, I went out with my big sister and we biked. Each time meeting new friends. Then we go to the cinema. During the second week, I often kept Paris, I went to the Eiffel Tower with my mother and my little sister and we could see all of Paris, it was magical and fabulous! It was the second time I go there, but the first time I go there I was a child, I was 3 years old.


...we rode our bikes. Each time we met new friends. ...I often stayed in Paris....it was my second trip there. My first time I was about three years old.
For three days I visited my grandparents. Every time I go there, I went out with my older sister and we bike. Each time we meeting some new friends and pass our times with them .

Then we are go to the cinema. During the second week, I went to the Eiffel Tower with my mother and my little sister and we could see all of Paris, it was magical and fabulous! It was the second time I go there. The first time I went there I was a child, I was 3 years old.