quelqu'un pourrait corriger mon devoir? please My friend's name is youssra. She is eighteen like me. We met in a school homework. She was looking someone who could help in Spanish, I speak spanish so i helped she. Since that day, we became friends. We have a lot of common, she doesn't like to eat fish and me not. We don't like mathematics. We love Spanish. We have the same style. and this summer, we was going together in London. I had know for a year. I see she three times a week. Please help me, that is for tomorrow

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2012-09-30T22:37:45+02:00

My friend's name is youssra. (ok)

She is eighteen like me. (ok)

We met in a school homework. (in a school homework? bizarre ; "at school" peut être que ça suffit ? avec : "in a study room" à vérifier)

She was looking someone who could help in Spanish. (ok)

I speak spanish fluently so I helped her.

Since this day, we became friends.

We have a lot of common, she doesn't like to eat fish like and me not. ("so am I" peut être)

We don't like mathematics.(ok)

We love Spanish.(~ok)

We have the same style. (ok)

and last summer, we was going together in London. (le verbe je ne suis pas sûr, peut être "we went")

I had know for a year.(? je ne comprend pas c'est bizarre; "I knew her" peut être)

I see her three times a week.

 

En espérant t'avoir aidé (mais je ne suis pas super bon en anglais).