Bonjour a tous j'ai un travail d'Anglais a faire et sa me réussie pas pouvez-vous aider s'il vous plait?
Alors je dois faire un paragraphe de plusieurs lignes sur:-I meet a star

merci d'avance

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Voila jespere que sa va:
I met rihana when i went to the USA at her concert. I met her at night after her concert and she was dressed in a long black dress and her hair was red, she had very high heels ! The queue to go and see her was very long , i waited 2 hours but then when my turn came up she signed my CD for me! Rihana is my role model! I would love to go and see one of her concerts again!
I met rihana when i went to the USA during her concert. I met her at night after her concert and she was dressed in a long black dress and her hair was red, she had very high heels ! The line for see her was very long , i waited about 2 hours but then when it was my turn, I was so exited... I came up and she signed my CD for me! Rihana is my role model! I would love to go and see one other concert in Europe !
J'ai corriger et ajouter :)
aaaaa merci beaucoup les filles
dr :)

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2013-10-29T14:47:21+01:00
N'importe quelle star ? 
Voila jespere que sa va:
I met rihana when i went to the USA at her concert. I met her at night after her concert and she was dressed in a long black dress and her hair was red, she had very high heels ! The queue to go and see her was very long , i waited 2 hours but then when my turn came up she signed my CD for me! Rihana is my role model! I would love to go and see one of her concerts again!
oui
2013-10-29T14:52:28+01:00
Tu peux dire que tu as toujours rêver de rencontrer cette star " I dream every night, and in all my dream you are in(side) " 
Dis que tu connais chaque parole de ses chansons "I know every word every emtion in your song" 
Avoue lui qu'elle est ton idole ''You are my idol I'm so glad and so lucky to meet you"
Voilà j'espere que ca t'as aidé !