Slt je sais pas si j'ai fais des fautes , si possible de m'en corriger si y'en a ça serait gentil ^^

"Hi jimmy , I can bring the drinks , I will take 5 bottles of Cola . My cousin will come with me and if you're aggry , We will sleep at your house . Thanks for your invitation See you , John"

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2012-09-26T22:18:11+02:00

Je dirais :

 

Hi jimmy , I can bring some drinks. I will take 5 bottles of Coke. My cousin will come with me and if you agree we will sleep at your home.

Thanks for your invitation. 

See you, John

 

En espérant t'avoir aidé.