Bonjour,

Pour demain, je dois présenter le règlement de mon lycée pendant 1 min 30 ! J'ai fait un petit paragraphe donc je vous demande si vous pouvez corrigez et améliorer mon texte pour que je tienne 1 min 30:

You have to always have your school planner in your possession.
It is forbidden to eat chewing gum in class.
It is forbidden to play to mobile in class but you may play to mobile in the playground.
It is forbidden to listen to music in class but you are authorised to listen to music in the playground.
It is stricly forbidden to smoke in school.
You must be a good time-keeper.
You need to respect your master and you need to obey the rules.

Merci d'avance !

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2013-09-15T14:09:16+02:00
You have to always have your school planner in your possession.It is forbidden to eat chewing gum in class.It is forbidden to play to mobile in class but you may play to mobile in the playground.It is forbidden to listen to music in class but you are authorised to listen to music in the playground.It is strictly forbidden to smoke in school.You must be a good time-keeper.You need to respect your master and you need to obey the rules. voila tout est bon sauf que j'ai corriger un mot c'est strictly
normalement tu devrait avoir une tres bonne note =) sur ce bonne chance =D
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2013-09-15T15:02:23+02:00