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Good morning Boss, I forward you my report on my visit in India to help you to prepare your film.

I found a marvellous place located in Agra La city Bombay, monument symbol of India ' Gateway Of Inde ': This one is the most famous of Mumbai, it, located on Apollon Bunder.

This magnificent building that could be used for the romantic scenes between our two heroes. I discovered a fountain named Flora (Hutatma Chowk) it is located in the heart of Mumbai at the intersection of five roads. At the top of it is the representation of 'Flora', the Roman goddess of flowers.

We could use it as a decor and our players could come to drink. Of course should ask the authorities if it can secure places finally not be invaded by the curious, or journalists.
I discovered another place, Chowpatty and Juhu Beach: the first, located on Marina Drive, every morning Mumbai residents and visitors stand, some dive to the shoulders, others fall into the water until only the feet or knees.

We could ask our players to do the same and to plunge, perhaps could make us a 'wink' to the James Bond films with the beach and Sean Connery and our favourite actors.

We must also think of the scene of the elephants, I found a great place to visit, with a wide variety of sea-creatures these at Marine Drive, Mumbai at the zoo, we lend elephants, I am sure that the tamers would be pleased to play extras in your movie.

The fix would be to circle an entire neighborhood of Bombay to run elephants and I do not know if we will have the authority, but it would make sense.

It is possible that we have some difficulties before leaving, that must be our actors all agree to vaccinate there are many mandatory vaccines to do before departure.

In addition it is necessary to check that all passports are up-to-date, because a Passport requires some time to be delivered in City Hall.



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2013-06-01T18:09:59+02:00

Good morning Boss,

I forwardED you my report on my visit in India to help you prepare your film.

I found a marvellous place located in Agra La city Bombay, monument symbol of India ' Gateway Of Inde ': It is one of the most famous of Mumbai, it, located on Apollon Bunder.

This magnificent building could be used for the romantic scenes between our two heroes. I discovered a fountain named Flora (Hutatma Chowk), located in the heart of Mumbai at the intersection of five roads. ON the top there is a representation of 'Flora', the Roman goddess of flowers.

We could use it as a decor and our actors could come to drink. Of course we would need to ask the authorities if it could secure the places so that we are not invaded by the curious souls, or journalists. 
I discovered another place, Chowpatty and Juhu Beach: the first, located on Marina Drive, every morning Mumbai residents and visitors stand, some dive to the shoulders, others fall into the water until only the feet or knees. (reformul, c'est pas tres claire, 'j'ai pas tout compris)

We could ask our actors to do the same and to plunge, perhaps it could be a 'wink'(je ne suis pas sure que ca se dise en anglais )to the James Bond films with the beach and Sean Connery and  some of our favourite actors.

We must also think about the scene of the elephant. I found a great place to visit, with a wide variety of sea-creatures, at Marine Drive, Mumbai at the zoo, we lend elephants, I am sure the tamers would be pleased to play extras in your movie.

The fix would be to circle an entire neighborhood of Bombay to run elephants (je n'ai pas tres bien compris) and I don't know if we will have the authorities, but it would make sense.

We may encounter some difficulties before leaving, one of which is that all actors must agree to have all mandatory vaccines before departure.

In addition it is necessary to check that all passports are up-to-date, because a passport requires some time to be delivered in City Hall.

 

 

voila, je crois que c'est tout. J'ai aussi supprime quelques mots, mais ca n'apparait pas.