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John Logie Baird was born on August 14th, 1888 to Helensburgh, in the Scotland and died June 14th, 1946 to Bexhill-on-Sea, in Sussex situated in the South of London. Being reached(affected) by a disease, what enormously handicaped him(it), he(it) however showed ingenuity. His(her,its) studies must be interrupted by the beginning of the World War I. Then, this one served as engineer for electric Clyde Power Compagny, afterward he(it) squeezed(tightened) integrated (joined) into this company.

A few years later, John Logie Baird has move to go to settle down towards the coast(rib) on England and dedicated its time(weather) to create a television set. His(her,its) first device of crude oil(gross salary) was conceived(designed) with low(weak) means but it managed all the same to obtain an unstable image. On January 26th, 1926, he(it) made, to the world

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John Logie Baird was born on August 14th, 1888 to Helensburgh, in the Scotland and died June 14th, 1946 to Bexhill-on-Sea, in Sussex situated in the South of London. Being reached by a disease, what enormously handicaped him, it however showed ingenuity. His its studies must be interrupted by the beginning of the World War I. Then, this one served as engineer for electric Clyde Power Compagny, afterward he squeezed integrated  into this company.

A few years later, John Logie Baird has move to go to settle down towards the coast on England and dedicated its weather to create a television set. His her first device of crude oil was conceived with weak  means but it managed all the same to obtain an unstable image. On January 26th, 1926, he made to the world.

 

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