C'est un résumé d'une histoire en anglais. Comme je fais beaucoup de fautes. J'aimerais qu'on me corrige mon orthographe, ma grammaire et aussi le temps utilisé. Quand je me relis je ne fais pas attention. C'est gentil, merci d'avance. Traduire ce qui est mis entre (). This is a story of Jonathan ( un adolescent de 15 ans) He hated cricket because for his cricket was the nicest boring sport in the world. Every sunday, his father always asked him to go to cricket. His father loved cricket, It was his passion and it was his time to relax. When he didn't look the cricket, he set on your sofa and watched his match on the TV with ham sandwiches. Jonathan was very bad because he didn't spending time with his father. He was always busy with his work. He felt that he doesn't exist for his father. Even if he hated the cricket, it was a question of family loyality.

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This is a story of Jonathan A 15-year-old teenager He hated cricket because of his cricket was the nicest boring sport in the world. Every Sunday, his father always asked him to go to the cricket. His father loved cricket, It was his passion and it was his time to relax. When he didn't look the cricket, he set on your sofa and watched his match on the TV with ham sandwiches. Jonathan was very bad because he didn't spend time with his father. He was always busy with his work. He felt that he doesn't exist for his father. Even if he hated the cricket, it was a question of family loyalty.