Bonjour ! J'ai fait mon devoir en anglais mais j'aimerais avoir des avis, et peut-être quelques critiques :) Savoir si ce que je dis tiens la route quoi ! ;) donc voilà : (en gors on est dans un camp de vacance et on veut que nos parents viennent nous chercher pcq c'est insuportable) Merci à ceux qui prendront le temps de lire :)

Mam, Dad, I have to tell you something. I cannot stand the holiday camp in Germany!

The rules are so strict. We have to sleep at 9pm and wake up at 7am! Can you believe it!?

And the animators, they’re such a pain! All you hear is: Don’t do this! Don’t do that! Come here!

Stay in group! It’s prohibited to eat in the bus! … And loads of irritating things!

Am I a baby?! I don’t think so.

And on top of that, Germany is boring as hell! We never do anything interesting. We just visit museum or library. Only those kinds of things! That’s pretty rubbish!

Come save to this place and I promise, I will tidy up my room and set the table every days! How about being the best daughter ever? What if I stopped not to follow your orders, would you take me back?

I will love you until the end of my own life!

I know it seems like an awkward teenage phase but please, could you come to pick me up as soon as possible! I’m over it now.

Thanks a lot in advance!

Love.

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2013-04-13T18:18:53+02:00

Je suis en 4eme et je trouve ton texte très bien mais tu devrais utiliser " ensuite , après  " etc