Bonjour je voudrais de l'aide pour savoir si vous pouvez corriger mon exposer enfin les phrase que j'ai préparé (5 phrase au present perfect , 3 phrase verbale ) ou ajouter quelque petite chose mon travail que j'ai fait pour l'instemps je fait sur tiesto un dj He was born in Breda, North Brabant, Netherlands on January 17, 1969.It was at The Spock, In the beginning of his career, as a DJ he played mostly New Beat and House music. A small club in Breda, he played in a separate room from 11 o'clock in the evening to 6 in the morning. The magazine Mixmag has considered him as the best dj in the world. He has already given a solo stadium concert and he has performed at the Opening Ceremony of the Olympic Games. He played live in front of over 3 billion people during the Parade Of The Athletes at the official opening ceremony of the Olympic Games in Athens 2004. Merci d'avance

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He was born in Breda, North Brabant, Nertherlands on january the seventeen(ou 17th), nineteen sixty nine(=1969).It was at The Spock, In the beginning of his career, as a DJ he played mostly New Beat and House music. A small club in Breda, he played in a separate room from eleven o'clock in the evening to six at(=au) the morning. The magazine Mixmag  considered him as the best DJ in the world. He has already given a solo stadium concert and he has performed at the Opening Ceremony of the Olympic Games. He played live in front of over 3 billion people during the Parade Of The Athletes at the official opening ceremony of the Olympic Games in Athens 2004. J'ai peut être oublié des choses désolé desfois j'ai soulignés sans rien changé c'est par ce que j'ai pas compris ce que tu voulais dire