Hello ! Comme devoirs j'ai dû faire un petit résumé d'une vidéo. Le voilà. Est-ce que vous pouvez me dire s'il y a des erreurs, de "mal dit", de conjugaison, etc... please ?

Merci ! =)

" Cheetahs are beautiful and speedy. But they are disappearing. Before, there had 100 000 cheetahs in Africa and Asia. Today only about 10 000 of the animals remain because farmers kill cheetahs because they can attack cattle. Laurie Marker is working to save animals. Cheetahs fascinate her. She created the Cheetah Conservation Fund, a group based in Namibia, to help protect the big cat. Marker worked with farmers to help protect their animals from the cheetahs. The solution was to use Anatolian Shepherd. They bark loudly to prevent cheetahs. Like Cheetahs don’t want to get hurt, they avoid those flocks where the dogs are. And it works ! Farmers have counted up to 80% reduction of dead animals, and the cheetah population has many increased. "

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2013-03-30T13:19:52+01:00

Tien il y'vait quelque erreur:

 

Cheetahs are beautiful and fast. But they disappear. Previously, there were 100000 cheetahs in Africa and Asia. Today only 10000 of the animals stay because the farmers kill cheetahs because they can attack(affect) the cattle. Laurie Marker works to save (to save) animals. Cheetahs fascinate her(it). She(it) created the Fund(Collection) of Preservation of Cheetah, a group based in Namibia, to help to protect the big cat(chat). The marker(scorer) walked(worked) with farmers to help and protect their animals of cheetahs. The solution was to use Anatolian Shepherd. They owed aboiyé hardly to prevent cheetahs. As Cheetahs did not want to hurt (injure itself), they avoid the herds where dogs. And it walked(worked)! The farmers mattered(counted) in the reduction of