Bonjour, pouvez vous me dire si il y a des fautes grammatical dans de paragraphe pour une redaction que j'ai a faire en anglais sur les avantages et les
inconvenients d'un telephones merci.
For me the benefits of a cellphone are called to someone if you have a problem and we're all alone like a car breakdown, you can take pictures when there is an event, you can watch his mail and surf the internet, listen to music, keep in touch with friends who live far away. Infact, the main quality of a cellphone is that all our units are grouped into one. And disadvantages, it is bad for your health, your parents can follow you everywhere and for some people it takes them out of real life.