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I was in Sahara since five days. It was very hot , sunny and dry. Theses weather conditions were unbearable ; a true summer Saharien . My body all whole was blushing by the sun striking of this desert ; but that had not prevent of look the beautiful landscape : a huge desert of dunes to fine sand . Was magnificent ! During this short stay , I did much of superb activities that I were unknown : I rode cammel , trap with other hunter , met news species of animals and I run in the burning sand of desert . During this travel , several thing had surprised , especially the life conditions difficults of rare inhabitants of Sahara .

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have been in the Sahara since five days. It was very hot , sunny and dry. Theses weather conditions were unbearable ; a true summer Saharien . My body all whole was blushing by the sun striking of this desert ; but that had not prevent of look the beautiful landscape : a huge desert of dunes to fine sand . Was magnificent ! During this short stay , I did much of superb activities that I was unknown : I rode camels , trap withanother hunter , met news species of animals and I run in the burning sand of the desert . During this travel , several things had surprised , especially the life conditions