J'ai une redaction a faire en anglais mais je ne suis pas sure de ma grammairepouvez vous me dire si ce texte est gramaticalement correct si non où sont les fautes merci
New York is my favorite city because there are many things to do.
If I had the opportunity to go to New York I would visit the Statue of Liberty as it is part of the history françaisela statue and also because it is the highest in the world 92.99 m. Then I would mount heut the Empire State Building like King Kong and Spiderman Alain Robert who climb with just his hands and without security. I would like to visit after a guggenheim museum because I love art. I love nature as I'd like to rest in central park. I would also go well even under what conditions were the immigrants Elis island. At night I would go see the lights of time and squatre brodway a comedy. That is why I really want to go to New York because there are a lot of things extraordinary visit.

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2013-01-09T20:02:08+01:00

c'est pas  I would like to visit after a guggenheim museum mais after, i would like to visit a guggenheim museum et je pense que la dernière phrase tu devrais la reformuler du genre : 
That is why I really want to go to New York because there are many extraordinary things that you can visit