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My name is Jennifer,I am 14 years old.I was born on October 20th. I live in 24 Street Maurice Thorez in Lyon.
I have got 1 brother and 2 sisters.
I like decorating and hanging out with my friends downtown but I dislike learning and gardening.I am honest,hard-working and responsible but I am easily scared.

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2014-10-11T15:54:28+02:00
My name is Jennifer, I am 14. I was born on October 20th. I live in 24 Street Maurice Thorez in Lyon.
I have one brother and two sisters.
I like decorating and hanging out downtown with my friends but i don't like learing and gardering. I am honest, hard-working and responsible but I am easily scared.
C'est "Street 24" ... Ou "24 Street"
24 Street
C'est mieux de mettre en français, Rue
2014-10-11T16:18:22+02:00
My name is Jennifer,  I am 14 years old. born October 20th. I am 5.3 ft, blue eyed and blond haired. I live at 24 Rue Maurice Thorez in Lyon. Lyon is the second or third big city of France, that is situated in the middle of France. It is an antic city that was called at the time of Vercingetoryx Lugdunum capital of the Gaules. 
I have 3 siblings: 1 brother and 2 sisters.
Learning and gardening aren't among my favorite hobbies, but  I am interested in art decoration, chill out with my friends, shopping, i love fashion but not a victim though...haha ;)  ... I am honest, hard-working and responsible and very enthusiastic. I'm joyful, creative and adore
to live life to the fullest. I have one shortcoming: i have hard to be confident.  there are some goals i'd love to achieve; succeed in my studies that is, and graduate in a field in which i have passion for, because the idea of spending my life in a work in which i m bored scares me off. So no other option than work hard for fulfilling my expectations.
ben non c'est amitié, je suis un bilingue, anglais français, et je parle aussi espagnol. si je peux me rendre utile c'est avec plaisir. je suis pas très fort en français, je suis un bon en maths
mais c'est une blague c'est bon :) une petite blague
c'est rien
mdr
alright girl