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Laura didn't want to go school because of violence,verbal and physical and

It was offensive remarks and she was ignored by everyone

If she asked to change her middle school, she would be alive. Laura didn't go to school because she suffered of punch and spit.

If she talked to the teacher, she would never commit suicide and the
culprit will be punished today. Laura didn't go to school because of
that. If Laura talked the polite the culprits should be punished today.

If Laura has talked to a teacher she would not commit suicide.

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2014-10-09T07:51:47+02:00
Laura didn't want to go to school because of both verbal and physical violence and because of offensive remarks towards her and she was ignored by everyone.
She would be alive if her parents dared to change her from her middle school. She suffered of punch and spit , and that makes her leave the school.
She should have talked to the teacher , in order to avoid commiting suicide and the culprit will be punished today. Laura didnt go to school because of that.If Laura talked to the police , the culprits would be punished today. If Laura has talked to a teacher , she wouldn't have commited suicide.
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