bonjour est ce que quelqu'un pourrait me corriger ce texte merci d'avance

Laura did'nt want to go to school because of its violence shot pier on the

shove and spit on him.



She was offensive remarks as it was ignored by all the world and is

threatened and to tease.



If she had asked to change her college she would be alive.



If Laura did not want to go to school because she suffered punch and spit



If she had not listened to make fun the accident would not have happened



If Laura has talked to a teacher she would not commit suicide and the culprits
should be punished today




If Laura did not want to go to school is because she suffered punch and

spit















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2014-10-08T19:03:27+02:00
Laura DIDN'T want to school BECAUSE OF VIOLENCE, THROWN STONE ON THE STREET, SPIT... Je n'ai pas compris ce que tu as voulu dire dans la deuxieme phrase désolé.
If she asked to change her middle school, she would be alive. Laura didn't go to school because she suffered of punch and spit.
Pas compris ce que tu voulais dire
If she talked to the teacher, she would never commit suscide and the culprit will be punished today. Laura didn't go to school because of that.