Mon prof dit que dans mon text est un peu de fautes. Est-ce que vous pouvez vous surveiller mon texte svp. il doit être parfait.
A few days ago I read an act, which yield a important issue. For that
reason I made me a lot of deliberations and this I want to display
here. I am going to wirte about, if students are allowe to use their
cellphones at school. If is widely believed that the most students have a
cellphone. So the question is: Should you use the cellphone at school?