Corrigez les fautes svp <3
I have one car and one Tiger . I am Very courageous , flexible , determined and totally selfish. I am not afraid to be with wild-type animals . I can jump a fire . I am good at jumping on top of a building and clinding à montain. I dislike read and write. I prefer to drink blood .i hate people gragile. I am crazy about criminal case. I am interested at swimming. I have participated in insect eating and i won first place .m'y favorite film is horror film. In my free time i do swimming and climbing. Corrigez les fautes svp. C'est pour demain. Merci

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2014-10-01T09:37:43+02:00
Selfish = égoïste, c'est bien ce que tu voulais mettre???
I have a car  an a tiger. Iam good at jumping on top of a buiding ; ça fait un peu Super man : tu voulais dire quoi exactement :I like jumping from one roof to another one??? Climbing. I dislike reading and writing I hate fragile people. Criminal casesMy favorite films are the horror one. during my spare time, I really like swimming and climbing (mais tu l'as déjà dit; ça fait un peu répétition,  Peut-être : my favorite hobbies during my spare time are swimming and climbing.
C'est juste une suggestion
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2014-10-01T10:41:17+02:00
I have one car and a tiger . I am very courageous , flexible , determined and totally selfish. I am not afraid to be with wild-type animals . I can jump in a fire . I am good at jumping on top of the buildings and climbing mountains. I dislike reading and writing. I prefer drinking blood .I hate fragile people. I am crazy about criminal cases. I am interested in swimming. I have participated in insect eating challenge and I won the first place . My favorite types of films are the horror ones. In my free time I practice swimming and climbing.

Voilà, il y avait pas mal de fautes..