Bonjour pouvez vous me corriger merci

1-Complétez le texte suivant en mettant les verbes entre parenthèses au prétérit simple ou au prétérit en be +-ing :

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She (go) to New York for the first time in 1890. In those days, air travel (not/exist). It (take) three weeks to sail from France to America by boat. When she (leave) home, she (feel) very excited. Imagine! she (go) abroad on her own. For the occasion, she (wear) her best clothes. Her parents (come) to Le Havre to say goodbye. All around her, people (kiss) and (hug). When the boat (sail off), she (can see) that her mother (cry) and her father (shout) last minute recommendations


She went to New York for the first time in 1890. In those days, air traveil did not exist. It took three weeks to sail from France to America by boat. When she left home, she was feeling very exicted. Imagine! She was going abroad on her own. For the occasion, she wore her best clothes. Her parents came to Le Havre to say goodbye. All around her, people were kissing and hugging. When the boat was sailing off, saw that her mother was crying and her father shouting last minute recommendations!




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Meilleure réponse !
2014-09-29T14:01:52+02:00
Juste à la fin je mettrai : when the boat sailed off, she coul see that her mother was cryingd her father was shouting...

sinon je pense que c'est ti-top
quelle fin?
excuse moi c bon j'ai fait une erreur
cerest un texte inventé ou un devoir avec les verbes à conjugué. Poste le ou si tu veux pas perdre de point mets le moi en message avec mon profil
merci
j'espère qque t'as corrigé mes fautes de frappe : she could see that her mother was crying and her father was shouting ....elle voit mais n'entends plus gd chose c'est pour ça que j'ai pas mis shouted.....peut-être à tort
2014-09-29T14:19:40+02:00
Tout semble correct ,mais je ne suis pas d'accord pour la dernière phrase .
When the boat was sailing off ,saw that the mother was crying and her father shouted last minute recommendations.

C'est une action qui dure et qui est interrompue