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Hello !

My name is thomas.
I'm in school (3eme). I was born the 18th
of january Two thousandc . I'm Fourteen years old. I was born in Trappes. I've
one brother, his name is logan ans he's Eighteen years old, and I’ve on
sister,his name his Clara ans he’s eleven years old. I live in Merignac. I am
tall, I have Black hair. I don’t have glasses and i don’t have dental device.
I'm clumsy, frank but lively. I have lots of defects: I'm pessimistic ,
suspicious and abrupt but I like helping the others. I like conscientious
people and I have never liked immature people. I like animals too: dogs and
cats.I would like to be a vet! I practice football with my coatch in a merignac StadiumOn my free
time, I usually go hunting. I like this, I practice accompanied hunting since
longJamel debouze he is has rolemodel for my because is famous for her
achivement in movieand has scene.




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2014-09-24T13:54:52+02:00
Hello !

My name is thomas.
I'm in middle-school (3eme). I was born the 18th
of january 2000. I'm Fourteen years old. I was born in Trappes. I've
one brother, his name is Logan ans he's Eighteen years old, and I’ve on
sister,her name is his Clara and she’s eleven years old. I live in Merignac. I am
tall, I have black hair. I don’t have glasses and i don’t have a dental device.
I'm clumsy, frank but lively. I have lots of defects: I'm pessimistic ,
suspicious and abrupt but I like helping the others. I like conscientious
people and I have never liked immature people! I like animals too: dogs and
cats.I would like to be a vet!. I practice football with my coach in a Merignac Stadium when I have free time. I usually go hunting. I like this, I practice accompanied hunting since
a long time. Jamel debouze is a rolemodel for me because he is famous for his
achievements in movies and shows.

Voilà(y avait pas beaucoup de fautes)