Bonjour a tous, je dois faire un devoir Sur les advantages d'etre une star, merci d'avoir Lu CE commentaire. Vous pouvez me corriger deux/trois phrases,bisous Bonne journee:
When are famous enabled a celebrity:be world-famous. The stars earn a lot of money and can have the mansions. Futhermore, they're allowed to do many things that normal people can't ,like be guest(VIP) at big party or meet the others stars. Their celebrity can travel everywhere in the world. They have the support of public. Also a great deal friends. To achieve the dream and to enjoy yourself

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"like being VIP gueste at big parties and meet othee stars"
"the celebreties can travel everywhere in the world"
parcontrees deux dernieres phrase ne veulent rien dire
the celebreties famous can go All aroud the world

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2014-09-14T16:21:29+02:00
When people are famous they are world-famous celebrities. Stars earn a lot of money and have mansions. Futhermore, they're allowed to do many things that normal people can't, like being a VIP guest at big parties or meeting others stars. A celebrity can travel everywhere in the world and have the support of public.They have great friends and achieve their dream and enjoy themselves.