Bonjour, a partir d'informations fournies en classe, je dois faire un texte, présentant une amie, pouvez vous me corriger svp !? (Et ce que je pourrais remplacer pour éviter les répétitions )
Merci d'avance !!
Voici mon texte :

[Nom, Prénom] was born on the 25th if November in [Ville], she have got 2 sisters but any brothers, his favourite animal is the dog. She loves gymnastic and [Prenom]'s favourite subjet at school is Spanish, his favourite type of music is the electronic. She loves [Nom d'une série] and his favourite day is Wednersday, she loves KFC. She went on Camping on holidays, and she wants to became a champion of gymnastic !!

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ne dit pas she have got mais she HAS :)

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2014-09-07T13:37:28+02:00
On november
She doesn't have any brother
Her favourite
Wesnesday
c ou "her favourite stp !?" et pr she doesn't have any brothers je le mets a la suite de "she have git 2sisters !?"
her favourite a la place de chaque his favourite
et oui pr she doesn't have any brothers
okay
merci bcp
2014-09-07T13:56:27+02:00
Au lieu de she loves gymnastic tu peut mettre his passion vis gymnastiques et au lieu d'utiliser le terme love tu peut utiliser likes