Salut, je suis nouvelle ! =)
bref... =)
j'ai fais une rédaction en anglais qui a pour sujet : talk about your last summer holidays

merci de me dire si la rédaction comprend des erreurs et merci de les corriger et merci de donner votre avis =)

la redaction :

During my last summer holidays, I was with my mother and my sister. To begin with, we went 2 week in Egypt.The first day,we visited the capital Le Caire.The second day, we went into 3 pyramid.Next,we went 1 week in Spain. The first da,we visited Barcelona.The second day, we went to the beach.
Finally,we went 1 week in Paris for visited the capital and go to Disneyland Paris. My last summer holidays was fantastic ! =)

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2014-09-07T11:25:38+02:00
2014-09-07T13:53:09+02:00
Coucou,
il ya une faute d'innatention a la ligne 2 --> daY
ligne 2 --> pyramidS
ligne 4 --> to visite
--> WERE fantastic

Je crois que c'est tout :)