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This year I went to Japan to see my family. With them, I went to the beach every day. It was fun. I stayed there five days and went back to Aulnay few days before the fireworks. Then with my family, I went to Soulac-sur-Mer, near Bordeaux. I also went to the beach and at the pool with my sisters. It was fun too. I spent a fun holiday !!