Bonjour,

J'ai un exo d'anglais, et je comprends pas trop, enfin je sais pas quand est-ce qu'il faut enlever that, je vous donne la consigne :
Rita explique par écrit à son amie Cecily qu'elle va se marier. Son style est peu clair, il y a trop de "that". Enlève that à chaque fois que c'est possible.

Dear Cecily,
I've met the man of my life! you know, the man that I wantes to meet! When he said that he loved the dress that I was wearing and that I was the most beautiful girl that he had ever seen, I knew that he was the man the man that I was going to marry! The man that I love is called Gary! He sells cars. The car that he drives every day is so awesome! It is a car that can go very fast! I can't renember the make.


Voilà ! Merci d'avance
Bonne journée !

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2014-06-11T13:09:52+02:00
Dear Cecily,
I've met the man of my life! You know, the man I want to meet! When he said that he loved the dress that I was wearing and I was the most beautiful girl that he had ever seen, I knew he was the man that I was going to marry! The man that I love is called Gary! He sells cars. The car that he drives everyday is so awesome! It is a car that can go very fast! I can't remember the make.

C'est vrai c'est pas très facile à lire ce texte - mais je pense que j'ai enlever les "that" qui ne sont pas nécessaire.



Meilleure réponse !
2014-06-11T13:56:42+02:00

Dear Cecily,
I've met the man of my life! You know, the man I want to meet! When he said that he loved the dress that I was wearing and I was the most beautiful girl that he had ever seen, I knew he was the man that I was going to marry! The man that I love is called Gary! He sells cars. The car that he drives everyday is so awesome! It is a car that can go very fast! I can't remember the make.


voila je crois que jai repondu a ta question je te souhaite bon courage