J'ai un commentaire en anglais à faire sur les aménagements, maîtrise de l'eau etc... J'envois simplement la deuxième partie du commentaire que je n'arrive pas très bien à faire..
.Sujet de la 2eme partie: Describe solutions to suplly Southwestern States with water. What problems such installations may lead to ?

J'ai déjà fais ça, si vous pouviez corriger, arrangez certaines choses et me dire ce qui ne va pas, cela m'arrangerais vraiment beaucoup.

"Agriculture has always been the largest user of water, demand from industry and cities, particularly in the South rising rapidly. The largest consumers are the countries where irrigated agriculture is important. For example, in the Imperial Valley there is the largest irrigated area in the US. 78% of Californian waters are being used by the agricultural sector. Moreover, since antiquity, men build hydraulic installations to use water like groundwater and rivers. Older dams have at least four thousand years. In central Arizona for example, there’s a project to build a giant aqueduct to supply the phoenix are with water. This project is one of the most expensive transfect systems in history ever. That projects dried up rivers and pollute the water. The grown surfaces decreases, there is less water so the crops are smaller. When there are less cultures, there are less food and insecurity’s food may happen."

merci d'avance.

1

Réponses

2014-06-01T18:41:58+02:00
The agriculture industry has always been the largest user of water, demand from industry and cities, particularly in the South are rising rapidly. The largest consumers are the countries( do you mean states?) where irrigated agriculture is important. For example, in the Imperial Valley (where in America?) it is the largest irrigated area in the US. Seventy-eight percent of Californian waters are being used by the agricultural sector. Moreover, since the Antiquity, men have built hydraulic installations to use water such as groundwater and rivers. Older dams (where) are at least four thousand years old. For example, in central Arizona, there’s a project to build a giant aqueduct to supply the Phoenix area with water. This (this or that - you need to choose) ) project is one of the most expensive transfect(?) systems in history ever. That (this or that - you need to choose) projects dried up rivers and polluted the water. The agricultural areas (?) surfaces has decreased, there is less water so crop production has shrunk. When there is less crops, there is less food and insecurity’s food may happen(?).
Quelques idées - mais c'est très bien...
En gras - c'est à changer
Souligner - à enlever
Italique/souligner - à revoir.
Dits-moi si tu as d'autres ques...