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I do not manage to sleep thus I write and I write in my pad He(It) is very late, I do not manage to close eyes because yesterday I saw my own eyes a scene(stage) which my traumatized. My reaction is to hide me I was very afraid I am in the street with my mother. There is a truck of police which runs(drives) very fast. The truck of police stops. A policeman goes to a young woman who goes out of a shop he catches him(it) strongly The woman shouted all her strengths and gave knocks to release itself she could not run away The poor woman she had a baby in the hands, whom she held and that she was about to release(leave) The baby began shouting and crying

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2014-05-26T22:51:11+02:00
I can't manage to fall sleep. I write and write in my journal. It is very late, I cannot manage to close eyes because yesterday I saw from my own eyes a traumatizing scene. My reaction was to hide, I was very afraid...
I was in the street with my mother. There was a police car that drove very fast. It stopped. A policeman comes out, and goes to a young woman who was going out of a store and catches her strongly. The woman shouted of all her strengths and tried hitting him to release herself but she could not run away. The poor woman had a baby in her arms, that she was about to drop. The baby began shouting and crying.

mets pas 2 fois manage :....I can't manage to sleep ou I cant manage to fall Asleep...I can't close my eyes....I saw from my own eyes, c'est du mot à mot je sais pas si ça se dit vraiment : I saw right in front of me (suggestion?)..my reaction was hiding me.....a police car driving very...Apoliceman CAME out , and WENT....and CAUGHT.( Attention aux temps)
je fais le même commentaire que plus haut parceque dans ton tt 1er post tu parlais d'une femme noire : goes to a young black woman. C'est pas la peine de le redire après