bonjour j'ai un dm sur un sujet donné que j'ai fait et j'ai besoin
de quelqun de fort en anglais pour corriger mes fautes et pour me dire
si je ne suis pas hors sujet:

sujet: you have called your best friend stupid and want to make amends. write an apology letter.

Dear antony,

i'm writing this letter because i want to apologize for misbehaving with you.
I shouldn't have called you dumb.
I had a lots of works and i was very tired.
I was snowed under and i have problem with my family in this moment.
My grand mother is dead and my father was unhappy and angry.
He lots of cried. Because of this situation i don't feel good.
I wich i had not said these words!
i wich i had said nothing!
I'm sorry about what happened, i've done a silly thing and l'll never do it again.
I hope you know it wasn't you fault.
I will never again.
I hope for you that i will be more nice, calm and more careful before pronounce my words.
Forgive me please!
I miss you, my best.
love from Ashley

je précise dite moi parce que je suis en seconde et j'ai peur que mon dm soit d'un niveau de 3e

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2014-05-25T16:45:26+02:00
Bonjour,
je vous propose ce texte puisqu'il y a quelques fois ou vous n'utilisez pas les temps verbaux correctement....mais rassurez-vous, le fond y est!!!

Dear antony,

i wrote this letter because i wanted to apologise for my behavior.  
I shouldn't have called you dumb.
I had a lot of work and i was very tired so i wasn't really myself that day.
i had quite a few problems with my family and it was really difficult to deal with it!
My grand mother died and that's why my father got angry and he was really  sad.
He cried a lot. Because of this situation, i put all my anger in you and i neglected your feelings.
I wich i had not said these words!
i wich i had thanked you for all what you did to me till now.
Im sorry about what happened, i've done a silly thing and i regret it so much.
 I promise l'll never do it again and if i can erase that moment from the past, i would have done so! I hope you will forgive me and we can continue like we were before.
From today onwards, I will be more careful and think twice before saying such harsh words

Forgive me please!
I miss you, my best.
                                                     love from Ashley
2014-05-25T17:37:01+02:00
I'm writing this letter because i want to apologize for misbehaving with you. 
I shouldn't have called you dumb.
I had a lots of works and i was very tired.
I was snowed under and i have problem with my family AT this moment.
My grand mother is dead and my father was unhappy and angry.
He lots of cried. Because of this situation i don't feel good.
I wich i had not said these words!
i wich i had said nothing!
I'm sorry about what happened, i've done a silly thing and l'll never do it again.
I hope you know it wasn't you fault.
I will never again.
I hope for you that i will be more nice, calm and more careful before pronounce my words.
Forgive me please!
I miss you, my best.

Je pense que tu n'as fais qu'une faute, après je ne suis pas sûre.