Bonjour j'ai un dm sur un sujet donné que j'ai fait et j'ai besoin de quelqun de fort en anglais pour corriger mes fautes et pour me dire si je ne suis pas hors sujet:

sujet: you have called your best friend stupid and want to make amends. write an apology letter.

Dear antony,

i'm writing this letter because i want to apologize for misbehaving with you.
I shouldn't have called you dumb.
I had a lots of works and i was very tired.
I was snowed under and i have problem with my family in this moment.
My grand mother is dead and my father was unhappy and angry.
He lots of cried. Because of this situation i don't feel good.
I wich i had not said these words!
i wich i had said nothing!
I'm sorry about what happened, i've done a silly thing and l'll never do it again.
I hope you know it wasn't you fault.
I will never again.
I hope for you that i will be more nice, calm and more careful before pronounce my words.
Forgive me please!
I miss you, my best.
love from Ashley

je précise dite moi parce que je suis en seconde et j'ai peur que mon dm soit d'un niveau de 3e

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2014-05-25T15:39:15+02:00
I WISH ET PAS I WICH
I M SORRY ABOUT WHAT IS HAPPENED
I WILL NEVER DO IT AGAIN

HE CRYED A LOT OF ET PAS HE LOTS OF CRIED

2014-05-25T18:13:37+02:00
I am writting...for the way I behaved with you.
I had a lot of work (singulier)
.. and I had (reste au passé) to deal with family issues at that moment
As my grandmother had died, my father was sad and angry
He cried a lot and I didn't know what to do and then didn't feel good
I whish I had not spoken to you this way
I will never (ajoute un verbe) again
I am sure I will be nicer next time as well as more carefull before saying any kind of these words
Please forget what I said and hope to hearing from you soon