Bonjour, j'ai préparer mon oral d'anglais mais vu que je suis pas très forte dans cette matière quelqu'un peut me dire si oui ou non j'ai fais des fautes ou si je dois changer des mots car des fois je savais pas quoi mettre ou comment le conjuguer, sur les 2 textes a suivre d'avance merci.



The city of Los Angeles is
situated on the West the United States, in the center of a vast desert enter of
a highly-rated, the sea, of the other one the mountain but it is also the second
big city after New York. The Americans often call him(it) by the diminutive L.A
which means " the angels ". She(it) attracts the populations thanks
to her(its) climate, her(its) lifestyle and the opportunity to realize her(its)
American dream there.




Michael Jackson, was
born twenty in new August one thousand nine hundred fifty eight, it was seventh
children of a family of nine children and it began sang to six years with his
brother in a group which was called Jackson five. He lived to Gary in the
Indiana with his family. Called king of the pop. The moonwalk was the step
favorites(whiskers) of Michael Jackson. He(it) was pursued for the rape on
children but he(it) won during the trial in one thousand nine hundred eighty
three and two thousand two. Jakson Michael dies twenty five in June two thousand
nine



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2014-05-09T17:49:58+02:00
Hello,
The city of Los Angeles is
situated on the West the United States, in the center of a vast desert of enter
a highly -rated, the sea , the other one of the mountain but it is thus the second
big city after New York. The Americans Often call him (it) by the diminutive LA
Which means " the angels " . She (it ) attracts the populations thanks
to her ( its) climate , her ( its) lifestyle and the opportunity to realize her ( its)
American dream there.




Michael Jackson what
born twenty in new August one thousand nine hundred fifty eight, what it seventh
children of a family of nine children and it began singing to six years with his
brother in a group Which was called Jackson five . He lived to Gary in the
Indiana with his family . Called king of the pop . The moonwalk what the step
favorites ( whiskers ) of Michael Jackson. He ( it) what Pursued for the rape on
children but he (it) won falling on the trial in one thousand nine hundred eighty
three and two thousand two. Michael Jakson this twentyfive in June two thousand
nine


C'est gentil mais tu m'aide pas beaucoup tu as recopier exactement la meme chose que j'ai mis