Bonjour,

Je dois partager mon plus beau voyage en anglais mais en utilisant le presetn perfect pour parler de mes experiences et au moins 3 phrases au superlatif et sous la forme d'un carnet de bord! J'ai pensé prendre mon voyage en italie qui m'a bien plu! Le problème est que je ne sais pas quand utiliser le present perfect!Est ce que je peux commencer mon récit ainsi:"e have left the middle school by sad weather!We were every impatient persons to leave!we have crossed Annecy,the tunnel of the mont blanc..." suis vraiment perdu, ce serait très gentil de m'aider!

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Voici le sujet : share your best trip experience in the page of a logbook.Describe the place, the activities, and your feelings and explain why this experience has been the best for you.You can add pictures to your logbook page.You must write 200 words to have all the points. use have+en to speak about your experience use at least three superlatives!
Voici mon début : Est-ce que j'utilise bien le temps du present perfect comme il faut ?
we have left the middle school by sad weather. We were every impatient persons to leave but the farewelles with the parents were difficult for some some left their family for the first time! we have crossed Annecy. During this time of road, everybody found an activity: listen to some music, read, discuss, nibble, play cards...The evening, having eaten our picnic on a highway station, we have looked at the movie "the son of the mask" in the bus. I had already seen this movie before. Nobody wanted
Nobody wanted to sleep, we were so incited...It has rained all the journey.

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2014-04-30T21:11:45+02:00
We have left the middle school by sad weather. We were very impatient to leave but the farewells with the parents were difficult for some persons because some left their family for the first time! We have crossed Annecy. During this time of the road, everybody found an activity: listen to some music, read, discuss, nibble, play cards...The evening, we have eaten our picnic on a highway station, we have looked at the movie "the son of the mask" in the bus. I had already seen the movie before. Nobody wanted to sleep, we were so incited...It has rained all the journey.

Ton devoir est assez bien pour l'instant avec une bonne utilisation du present perfect, continue ainsi. Tout de fois, fait attention aux erreurs "bêtes" d'oublis ...