Bonjour, pourriez-vous me corriger?
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Il s'agit d'une description d'une peinture
document is a painting it was painted by Norman Rockwell in 1967.
scene takes place in the residence, during the day.
the foreground there are a lamp, sofa, rug and a table and In the
middle on the left side I can see two children and a cat and on the
rights side there are three children and a dog.
them on the right side there are a moving van and a man.
the background on the left I can see a row of houses that resemble
and there is a yellow car that is parked.
residence is mainly lined with lawns and planting near houses.
is a lot of green and yellow on the painting, the houses are yellow,
the car and the couch and the lamp.
are lots of green lawn and there are also green plants around homes.
the middle on the left, there are two children, a girl and a boy who
have black skin.
boy is wearing a white sweater and long white socks with shorts
scratch black, white and gray with white and gray trainers he holds
in his hand a baseball glove.
girl who is smaller than the boy is wearing a dress and pink socks,
she braided hair and a pink nodes with black shoes. She holds in her
arms a white cat.
front of there are children: two boys and a girl most tall wearing a
yellow sweater, jeans and a white and beige shoes glove to receive
the ball in baseball his hair are brown, a dog is sitting beside him.
his side there is another boy who has blonde hair and wears a white
cap and a white and blue outfit with brown trainers.
is a little girl behind who wearing a beige sweater, white socks,
black shoes and black shorts. Her hair is tied.
watch and insists we seem to want to know and play together as
animals are observed, they all seem curious
mover has white skin, it is brown discharging and a black suitcase.
His truck is old and white with blue writing and other black. He
concentrated on the air in his work.
think that black children have moved because the truck is directed
merci de votre aide :)