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It was a Wednesday, children's day, it was almost 16:30 and everyone was at the park because the weather was sunny. We sat on a park bench with Laura, my daughter. In front of there was my boy, Top who played slide.
All of a sudden, we heard a loud noise, tyres crunching. Followed by sudden braking. There was very footsteps.
Our bench, we could see the accident, saw a body bumped into a car. There was a men yell at each other, was driving. He was very upset.
The people run to the men lying on the ground to try to help.
Other called the fire departement. Upon their arrival they moved to a large plastic bag. There was a lot of blood drops on plastic. Finally, they moved the injured person on the wheelchair and they shipped. Usually it does not happen this kind of accident. Here it is very quiet.