Bonjour es que vous pouvez maider . Jai un corespondant en anglais.Et jaimerais lui dire ceci es que vous pouver le traduire merci.



Bonjour je mappele luna j'ai 15 ans je vis a chanpigny sur marne.Je vis dans une maison.J'ai 2 frere et une demi soeur.Je suis en 3e au college henri rolt tanguy.Plus tard je voudrais faire journaliste ou hotesse de l'air ou encore pilote.Je suis sportif je fais de la natation en competition .j'aimerais bien aller au canada un jour.Je ne voyage pas souvent ,je suis deja aller a londre pour mon anniverssaire.C'etait magique.Ce que j'aime c'est le shoping ,la nouriture,regarder la tele.J'adore les series americaine policiere.Je deteste le football .




Et si vous aver des ider pour que je rajoute dautre phrase je veu bien merci.et as de traducteur.

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Hi, my name is luna. I'm fifteen. I live in Chanpigny sur Marne in a house. I've got two brothers and an half sister. I'm on the third class in henry rolt tanguy college. Later I would like to be journalist, flight attendant or pilot. I'm sporty. I do swimming in competition. I would like travel Canada one day. I don't really travel often. I'm already going to London for my birthday and it was fantastic. I love is shopping, food, watch tv. I really love american police series. I hate soccer.

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2014-04-24T15:20:45+02:00
Bonjourr!
J'espère que cela aide! (:    

Hello, my names is Luna, I am 15 years old, and I live in chanpigny on "marne"(?). I live in a house. I have two brothers and a half sister. I am in college "henri rolt tanguy" nom? Later when I graduate, I would like to be a journalist, a flight attendant, or a pilot. I am in a swiming competition. I would really like to go to Canada one day. I do not travel often but I went to London for my anniversary, it was amazing! There, I loved the stores, the food and watching TV. I also love english tv shows that involve the police. One thing however, I hate football (haha). 
merci es que tu aurai une idé pour que je dise autre chose car sela fait cour
Demi-soeur = stepsister
champigny-sur-marne garde le même nom en Anglais
HAHA que je viens d'écrire "anniversaire" comme "anniversary".. je voulais "birthday" désolé..ou avez vous dire "anniversary"..et pas ..je ne sais pas ce que d'écrire, désolé
2014-04-24T15:31:11+02:00
Voici le texte traduit (+  autres idées mises en italique)

Hello! I hope you're fine...
My name is Luna and I am 15 years old. I live in Champigny sur Marne near Paris. I live in a house. I have two brothers and one half-sister. I'm in 3° in the Henri Rolt Tanguy college. I am very sporty, I do swimming competitions and I like it. One day, I would like go to the Canada. I don't travel very mutch but I went at London for my birthday. It was fantastiques!!!! I like shooping, food and wathching TV. I love police American series but I hate football. I'am realy enjoy at the idea to have a English partner. What''s your name, what do you like? What's your favourite song, your favorite singer?