Bonjour, est ce que vous pouvez me corriger les fautes de grammaire et aussi me dire des phrases que je pourrais rajouter. Merci :)

I have already played piano. I began seven years ago and I stopped 1 year ago because my music was horrible. I knew to play pop music. I have never took lessen of piano. I played piano two a week. I played piano in my bed room. I like many music especially pop music and certain electronic music. I bought music in my Ipod. I listen to music every day on evening. I don't like certain electronic music, certain rock music, rap music, funk music and classical music. I hate Skrillex and la fouine. I have already played flute, drums, guitar and youkoulele but it's very difficult. I don't sing because I don't know to sing.



Merci de me corriger ;)

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Est-ce qu'il faut tout conjugué au past ????
et est ce qu' il faut tjs faire les répétitions "I played piano". C'est des phrases que tu devais traduire où un texte à faire; si c'est un texte, on peut le modifier un peu pour éviter les répétitions ????
va sur reverso pour corriger les faute orthographe

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I have already been playing piano. I began seven years ago, but I never took lessons. Finally, I stopped last year because my music wasn't so nice. I used to play piano twice a week in my bedroom. I Know a little how to play pop-music. I like lots of differents kind of music as pop music, electro, rock, rap, funky and even classical, but not all of them.
What I prefer is (donne le nom d'un groupe) but I hate Skrillex and La Fouine because (trouves une raison). I listen to music every day every evening. I buy music through my Ipod so I don't have to buy the cd's, because sometimes I only like a couple of songs. I tryed to play flute, drums, guitar and youkoulélé as well, but it's very difficult. I should choose one instrument and take lessons; it would be easier, I think. I never sing because it sounds awfull................................
Je sais pas trop si ça correspond à ton devoir, tu n'as pas vraiment donné d' indications
mais si ça peut t'aider, c'est tant mieux