Pourriez vous corrigez ma redaction d'anglais. Je suis actuellement en seconde et mes proffesseurs me menace de ne pas me faire passer dans la filliere
que je veux si je ne remonte pas ma moyen en anglais. Je sais qu'elle est longue mais comme vous pouvez le voir je donne bcp de points. Aidez moi SVP
"le sujet: imagine a conversation beetween the writer and her daughter who wants to go school alone."
Laura enter to the dinning room says his father: "
-dad today my boyfriend decided to wait for me in front of the college. I can go nthere only just for this morning ? Laura askeds
-No laura you know everythings danger wich he has by crossing the road and with cars you there has never made the path only in more. his father answers.
-You like dad i promises you to pay attention and the look well befoe crossing I am twelve years old i know what is grave a not. She implores -Weel ok i wear you me call appeal before and later, as soon as you arrive and it is a test if you does well attention i would let with you return to it only. He concedes -Thank you dad you are the best and i would indead pay attention by going there doesn't worry you and i know that i have to pay attention because danger are everywhere. She tanks.
- You know i dont want that you go stand there it is that i am afraid for you laura i makes and esception today it is because that i report me that you murries a lot and that you are not anymore a child visit your boyfriend but me wants to know nothing just tha you is well! He sells.