I've got a twin sister, her name's Clara. My parents divorced 11 years ago. I'm now living with my mother who met a man. I live with my step-family: Mathis is my step-brother. I visit my father twice a month and we spend Summer holidays together. When I'm eighteen years
old, I'll buy a car. I'd like to visit world-wide. When I am grown up, I would like to be a doctor because I like to help some others. I'd like to live in New-York City. Later, I would like to have a baby, if I've got a girl, she will be called Alvena, but if I've got a boy, he will be called Nathan. I would like to be the world champion in swimming.

Pouvez-vous me corriger mon devoir d'anglais? Ce qu'il faut améliorer? Ce qu'il faut changer?

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2014-03-08T23:20:42+01:00
When I become an 18-year-old, I'll buy a car.
When I become a grown up, I would like to be a doctor because I like helping others.
 if I get a girl, she will be called Alvena, but if I geta boy, he will be called Nathan.