Bonjour,

Je devais faire en Anglais deux petites rédactions et j'aimerais savoir si je réponds bien au sujet et si il n'y a pas trop de fautes. Merci d'avance.

Q1

Dear John,





I received your letter. I
think it is normal that you are not yet sure what you want to do
late. At our age, we ask a lot of questions about our future and I
think we can not know exactly what we will do after school. If you
want someone to advise you, you might be able to make an appointment
with a career counselor. I think she will be able to help you and
answer some of your questions.





I hope that I have helped
you. See you soon.


Q2

It existed in a small Colorado town an old house. It was built there are two centuries.. This house had seen many tragedies. Each family who settled came to a tragic end. Rumored today it is haunted. The house is now no longer for sale but courageous visitors can venture at their peril. But at the end of the visit, the visitors were terrified. They told we could feel a breath in the house, you could hear the laughter of children in some parts of the house, and a door was downright enclosed on one of the visitors.

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Réponses

2014-03-06T16:47:52+01:00
Dear John, 
I received your letter.
To me  it is normal if you don't know  what you want to do after school.
At our age, we ask a lot of questions about our future and I
think we can't know yet exactly what we will do after school. If you
want someone can advise you, you might be able to make an appointment
with a career counselor. I think he will be able to help you and
answer some of your questions. 
I hope  I have help you 
 See you soon.




Merci pour ta réponse ! Le deuxième texte ne comporte pas trop de fautes ?