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Est-ce que le "the" est correcte dans la phrase que j'ai mis en gras.


I've got a twin sister,
her name's Clara. My parents divorced 11 years ago. I'm now living
with my mother who met a man. I live with my step-family: Mathis is
my step-brother. I visit my father twice a month and we spend Summer
holidays together. When I'm eighteen years old I will buy a nice car.
I'd like to visit world wide. When I am grown up, I would like to be
a doctor because I like to help the others. I'd like to live in
New-York and to have a child. If I've got a boy he will be called
Nathan and if I've got a girl she will be called Alvena.
I would like to be the
world champion in swimming.



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Ouais
ben t' as raison, au moins c'est un échange de bons procédés..............sans rancune, j'espère
Ok
merci
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  • Utilisateur Brainly
2014-03-02T11:54:42+01:00
Bonjour, 

I've got a twin sister,her name's Clara. My parents divorced 11 years ago. Today, I live with my mother who met a man. I live with my step-family: Mathis is my step-brother. I visit my father twice a month and we spend Summer holidays together. When I'm eighteen years old I will buy a nice car.I'd like to visit world wide. When I am grown up, I would like to be a doctor because I like to help others. I'd like to live in New-York and have a child. If I've got a boy he will be called Nathan and if I've got a girl she will be called Alvena. I would like to be world champion in swimming. 

Je t'ai corrigé ce que je pensais non-approprié, bonne journée :)
2014-03-02T13:55:21+01:00
Je pense que ton texte est très correct. Pour ma part j'aurais plutôt mis  ...to visit the whole world

le THE devant the world champion est juste.

C'est un texte bien écrit!!
et le THE devant others qu'est-ce que tu en penses?