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I've got a twin sister,
her name's Clara. My parents divorced 11 years ago. I'm now living
with my mother who met a man. I live with my step-family: Mathis is
my step-brother. I visit my father twice a month and we spend Summer
holidays together. When I'm eighteen years old I will buy a nice car.
I'd like to visit world wide. When I am grown up, I would like to be
a doctor because I like to help the others. I'd like to live in
New-York and to have a child. If I've got a boy he will be called
Nathan and if I've got a girl she will be called Alvena.
I would like to be the
world champion in swimming.