Bonjour, pourriez vous S.V lire ma lettre de motivation et la corriger si besoin.
Merci d'avance ;)


Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing to you about your advertisement “Wanted:Young person” in London Gazet of february 2014.
I am 19 years old and I am student in the first one year of medicine. I'm really interested
in this environment. I would define myself as a hardworking, caring,
responsible, patient and reliable.


Later, I shall wish to specialize in geriatrics, that is why I write you to
apply for this job. I would like to help and caring of the elderly.
This experience would allow me to get acquainted with my future
patients.
I have already worked as assistant of life in the London Institute
during July and August 2012-2013. My work consisted has to help the
elderly in them everyday life: toilette, meal, care and walk. I thus
think of being capable of exercising brilliantly your expectations: “
have some experience of caring for older people”, “taking people
for walks”, “helping out with afternoon tea” and “ some
cleaning work”.

I am available for interview at any time, so please don't hesitate to
contact me at 06/**/**/**/**, on every day.

Yours faithfully

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C'est pas mal , oubli pas de marquer ton nom et adresse
d'accord merci ;)

Réponses

2014-03-01T15:45:48+01:00
Dear Sir or Madam, 

With reference to your advertisement in London Gazet on February 2014 , for hiring a young and dynamic person.
   
 Please note that I am 19 years old and I am a freshman student of medicine. I'm really interested in this opening since I find myself hardworking, caring, responsible, patient and reliable.

I am planing to specialize in geriatrics, that is why I am applying for this job in order to be able to take care of and help as much elderly as I could , learning that having this experience in your esteemed Institute will help much in my studies and in my future career.  

I have already worked as an assistant in the London Institute during July and August 2012-2013 respectively . My work consisted in helping the elderly in their everyday's activities like : toilette, meal, care and walk. I have excellent skills in 
"taking people out for walks”, “helping them out in having their afternoon tea” and “ some
cleaning work”.

Looking forward to hearing that you are interested in hiring me .

I am available for interview at any time, so please don't hesitate to contact me at 06/**/**/**/**, on every day. 

Yours faithfully