QUI peut me corriger mon devoir D'anglais , je dois parler de mon enfance et utiliser used to et le preterit.


When I was
young, i used to do many stupidity. bUT I DIDN'T USED TO BE Curious. I spent my
time reading and drew; i like giving and mostly. I used to helping people, i
used to wacth detective man conan befor school. I LOVED and skill likes. I didn't like to meat , i
used to understand quickly.
I used never be bad.




I used to
play with my friend after school but i can't do it anymore because i have got
many homework.



I used
never be bad. when
I was very
young, I used to take the train every morning to go to school in paris






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  • Utilisateur Brainly
2014-02-27T11:22:20+01:00
When I was young, i used to do much stupidity. But I wasn't Curious. I spent my time for reading and drew; i have liked giving and mostly. I used to helping people; i used to watch detective man Conan before school. I have loved and skill likes. I didn't like to meat, i used to understand quickly. I used never be bad.
I used to play with my friend after the school but i can't do it anymore because i have got
much homework.
I used never be bad. When I was very young, I used to take the train every morning to go to school in Paris.

Voilà pour les fautes ! 
Tu as une faute dans "i like giving and mostly" car "mostly" signifie "surtout" donc il manque un mot il me semble
WHEN i WAS YOUNG i USED TO BE A BIT SILLY; i USED TO PLAY TRICKS TO MY ENGLISH TEACHERS i USED TO PLY THE FOOL WITH MY FRIENDS AND I DIDN'T used to work hard at school.I used to like playing games and watching tv all day long during week ends.
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