Pour demain ! pouvez vous m'aider ? me corriger ce texte ! merci d'avance !
This image is designed to make you react and make you understand that you have a role to play in protecting the environment. "You can we help stop this desaster " the picture represent an oil refinery , a factories, a tyre , a tank .the environment, the rivers is polluted.the world is polluted, sad and is our fault.The future may look like this.I'm outraged by you!i'm not optimistic.Nobody made be careful in our planet . You polluted with your factories , your cars , your waste.Chemicals are responsible for the hole in the ozone layer.Your factories create a oil slick. you don't think a spèces live in the rivers ! i feel really ill-at-ease.The greenhouse effect is the consequence of the pollution.Global warming alters weather patterns.the earth has changed and you has not changed.The environmentalists have launched an awareness-building campaign in favour of the preservation of earth. One of the solutions would be either to develop alternative energy sources or to ban traffic altogether. You must recycle , protec our environment !to counteract this désaster.the futur is in your hand.

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2014-02-16T19:59:45+01:00
je vais t'aider alors !! 

This image is designed to make you react and make you understand that you have a role to play in protecting the environment. "You can we help stop this disaster " the picture represent an oil refinery , a factory, a tyre , a tank .the environment, the river is polluted. the world is polluted, it's sad and it's our fault. The future may look like this. I'm outraged by you! I'm not optimistic. Nobody made be careful in our planet . You polluted with your factories , your cars , your waste. . Chemicals are responsible for the hole in the ozone layer. Your factories create an oil slick ,you don't think about species who live in the rivers ! I feel really ill-at-ease. The greenhouse effect is the consequence of the pollution. Global warming alters weather patterns. the earth has changed and you have not changed. The environmentalists have launched an awareness-building campaign in favour of the preservation of the earth. One of the solutions would be either to develop alternative energy sources or to ban traffic altogether. You must recycle ,protect our environment  ! to counteract this disaster. the future is in your hand..

je crois que c'est ça mais il y'a des phrases que je ne peut pas corriger car je ne vois pas trop ce que tu veut dire 
d'accord merci ! :) quel phrase ne veulent rien dire ??
"You can we help stop this disaster " celle ci j'ai ruien compris ça veut dire tu/vous peut nous aidez pour arretez ce désastre et jai oublier desaster c'est disaster
d'accord merci le reste est bon ?
oui je t'ai recorigé il y'avait des chose que j'ai oublié mais il y'a des phrases je ne vois pas trop le sens desolé
pouvais vous me dire ces phrases svp ?