bonjour quelqu un pourrai m aider en traduisant ce texte que j ai écrit svp merci d avance


Lucas arrive dans un collège. C’est un nouvel élève. Celui-ci
avait des cheveux marron et des yeux verts.
Une fille, nommé Camille, tomba amoureuse de lui des qù elle le vit. La
blonde aux yeux bleus lui proposa d’aller à la mer ce samedi. Il accepta.
Pendant leur rendez-vous, Lucas tomba amoureux d’elle. A la maison, elle parla
de son amour a son père, mais celui-ci n’était pas d’accord. Il ne voulait pas
que sa fille ait une relation avant ses 18 ans. Il prit la décision d’aller
parler aux parents de Lucas pour que ce dernier arrête de voir Camille. Lucas
doit déménager a ile de la réunion, pour ne plus voir Camille. Mais Camille ne
peut pas vivre sans lui non plus, alors elle acheté un billet d’avion pour le
suivre sans que son père ne le sache. Mais l’avion s’écrasa, les secouristes
retrouvèrent que les 2 jeunes qui ont survécus, mais gravement blesser. A l hospital, Camille décéda sur la table d’opération.
Lucas se mit
à pleurer en pensant qu'il ne reverrait plus celle qu'il aime. Il demanda à
voir une dernière fois sa bien aimé. Seul dans la salle avec le corps de Camille,
il décida de mettre fin à sa vie en s'ouvrant les veines.



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2014-02-06T16:38:52+01:00
Lucas is back in college . This is a new student.
He had brown hair and green eyes .
A girl named Camille , fell in love with him that she saw .
The blonde with blue eyes suggested that he go to sea on Saturday. He accepted .
During their appointment , Lucas fell in love with her. At home she spoke
His love was his father, but it was not okay. He did not want
 
that her daughter had a relationship before age 18. He decided to go
 
talk to parents about Lucas that he stop seeing Camille . Lucas
 
must move to Reunion Island , never to see Camille . But Camille
 
can not live without him either, so she bought a ticket to the
 
follow without his father 's knowledge. But the plane crashed , rescuers
 
regained the two young people who have survived , but seriously hurt.
At the hospital, Camille died on the operating table.
Lucas started crying thinking he would never again see his beloved . He asked
 
a last look at his beloved . Alone in the room with the body of Camille
 
he decided to end his life by opening the veins.

2014-02-06T16:41:22+01:00
Lucas enters college. This is a new student. This one
 
had brown hair and green eyes .
 
A girl named Camille , fell in love with him as soon as she saw him . the
 
blonde with blue eyes suggested that he go to sea on Saturday. He accepted .
 
During their appointment , Lucas fell in love with her. At home she spoke
 
His love was his father, but it was not okay. He did not want
 
that her daughter had a relationship before age 18. He decided to go
 
talk to parents about Lucas that he stop seeing Camille . Lucas
 
must move to Reunion Island , never to see Camille . But Camille
 
can not live without him either, so she bought a ticket to the
 
follow without his father 's knowledge. But the plane crashed , rescuers
 
regained the two young people who have survived , but seriously hurt. At the hospital, Camille died on the operating table.
  
Lucas began
 
crying thinking he would never again see his beloved . He asked
 
a last look at his beloved . Alone in the room with the body of Camille
 
he decided to end his life by opening the veins.
merci Hilol c est sympas
Pas de souci si tu trouve que je t'ai bien traduit cela met moi une meilleure réponse :)
je connais pas trop le site il faut faire comment ?
Alors vu qu'il n'y a que ma réponse dans la 1ere réponse que je t'ai donné juste a coté du truc "merci" tu dois avoir ' mettre comme meilleure ou quelque chose comme ça et tu clique ici.
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