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Clara is a doctor and she is surely the mother most soft and peace whereas her daughter Linda in an adolescent crisis. Loocking back Linda is used to getting pu betimes but with time she bécane slothful. From now one Clara would Like That Linda realize That the Life That she Leads risk of having heavy consequences for her future
The mother is decided to make exchange the behaviour's daughter, in order to finance à new bathroom but Clara discovers That Linda thinks doesn't be mature
She doesn't worry about her studies even more to spend time as to look for an odd job
Clara is in bad mood, she has even decided to take a gap year.
Consequently she makes her mother feel guilty by blaming her. At first the wedding of her father thénar her mother is bellyaching. She ends by asserting That There are things more important as the hunger in emerging country.

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2014-01-23T20:35:53+01:00
C parfait mais tu devrais plus argumenter  et a at first the weed pas wedding